Not Natural Chapter 1

out-freakin'-standing! the much awaited first chapter...and we've already had one supernatural encounter! yeah, the black frames make sub-frames hard to make out...when Harriet gets attacked by the ghost, it looked like Destiny was sitting on the floor right next to her, so I was like "who's that grabbing the 'I hope it's iron' rod?" if you're going to have a lot of dark settings, I recommend maybe a blood red frame or something cool looking like that, just to make frames and sub-frames easier to make out. also, the sound effect text isn't working for me: it's hard to read, and where it's located in the frame is confusing...like when all the dialog and action is happening on the left side, and the sound effect is on the right, my eyes naturally go from top left to bottom right, so I don't read the sound effect until after the dialog and watching what the characters are doing. you might want to put sound effects in boxes, like at the top left of the frame, so we know that the characters are reacting to what they're hearing

a bit of a funny: when Destiny is pointing his finger in Harriet's face going "who are you?", she looks like she's staring at the finger

great start, and setting the theme with ghost-hunting, Harriet's worried about getting caught hunting, Destiny's worried about getting caught by Mother Superior and getting his DS confiscated. interesting how you show them side by side climbing in through different windows, that's a neat technique. looking forward to chapter 2!

p.s. hey...where be Skylar? that rainbow hair gotta get camera time, yo!